YSABELLE TORRES

Ysabelle Torres (01) 3e5'11.

My current worst subject is Chemistry :P
Please comment on my posts (constructive criticisms and praises much appreciated)

Personal blog: http://www.pirouettesoncloudnine.blogspot.com


Friday 8 July 2011

COMMENTS! (:

Michelle (30) - HEY! I think that your answers are very summarized and is suitable for quick revisions! However, you should perhaps include more information in your answers. Your font is good and easy to read, so that's a plus. Your blog skin is neat and tidy too! Include more punctuation in-between so that your sentences won't be too long! :>

Aleen (27) - Okay, your blog is super informative and very wordy! However, I think that you should style your paragraphs in a way that it doesn't look SUPER wordy because; well, people -especially teenagers in our age group- will surely feel the need to sleep when they see like a huge chunk of words in one paragraph! HAHAHA, maybe try breaking them down into more paragraphs and perhaps adding underlines, highlights and colours so as to make it look more 'teenager-friendly'! :>

Mingsiew (25) - I like your answers for the question regarding the isotopes. However, for those questions about the ions and atoms; I know that you can write more! HEHE, maybe write more information or something! (: Other than that, you pretty much nailed down the important points! Good work! :>

Chelsea (08)  - Yo bro! Hehehe, you also have the important stuff written down, but I feel like your answers could have been better with more information! Just crap a lot :P MAYBE it'll gain you a few extra points seeing that you've went great lengths in understanding the subject! HAHA, I know that you rushed your answers, hence they're quite short! Anyway, still good answers! :D

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